THE BRIEF
I'm opening a coffee truck outside a hospital. Most customers will be nurses and doctors on breaks. I need copy for the side of the truck and the menu board. Short.
Scenario: Owner of a new espresso truck parked near a hospital
Package: Packaging or signage copy · $50 · 4 hrs
On the truck:
"Fast coffee for long shifts."
That's it. Big, on the side people walk toward.
REJECTED
Fuel for heroes. They hear it all day. Most hate it.
Your daily grind. Every coffee place.
Coffee that cares. Coffee doesn't.
Rx: Coffee. Cute once.
UNDER THE MAIN LINE (SMALLER)
"Ready in 3 minutes. Order ahead on the app."
They have 15-minute breaks. The time is the pitch.
MENU BOARD
Coffee $2.50
Latte $4.25
Cold brew $4.00
The 12-hour $5.50 (cold brew, 2 extra shots)
Badge price: $1 off with any hospital ID.
REJECTED MENU NAMES
The Night Shift Too heavy at 7 a.m.
Code Brown No.
BACK OF THE TRUCK
"See you on your next break."
HOURS SIGN
"Open 5:30 a.m. to 8 p.m. Shift change? We're here."
NOTE
No exclamation points anywhere. Tired people don't want to be shouted at.
— Felix
